Thursday, April 11, 2013

Top Floor

Here's the forward and the first chapter to the fiction story I am writing called "Top Floor". Feedback welcome. Hope you enjoy!
                               
                                                            Top Floor


Forward
Through the gap in the drapes 16 year old jenny could see it all, plain and simple. They had lied. Every last one of them. Not only to her but among themselves they had lied. About that night in the theater and the moment that they had become friends. The lies poured through his little innocent grin, acting like nothing was going on, when obviously there was something and it wasn't little…. In fact it was quite the scandal. He told her that she would always come first. Little did she know at the time, that trusting him meant putting trust in alliances she never knew she had. She felt like a fool for believing him at this moment. Not knowing whether to burst through the doors and out in to the vulnerable open word to stop them, or to just sit tight with the photo evidence and go on acting like she had seen nothing, waiting for a more beneficial opportunity to arise to sabotage them. Jenny chose plan B.
                As she rushed back to the spiraling staircase located in the front hall, where she had been asked to wait for Carson, she stumbled and came face to face with her soon to be newest ally.  He was tall, with that kind of contagious yet genuine smile. His vibrant blue eyes met hers as he frantically asked if she was alright.
                “Oh I am so sorry! I tend to get in to a hurry and things always go downhill from there!”
                “It's quite alright; we all get ourselves in to these situations on occasion.” Jenny replied, relieved that something exciting had happened for once.
                “Well good night misses……..?”
                “Hodges... Jenny Hodges.”
                “Ahhh well goodnight Miss. Hodges.”
                “Farewell”          
                 At that moment Carson strolled up with a look of mischief in his eye.
                “Are you ready Jenifer?”
                “Yes of course dear. Though I wish you would call me jenny as everyone else does.”
                Carson was silent. Jenny knew not to push the matter and so she walked to the car in a forced silence.
                As they pulled up to door of Jenny’s apartment building and she started to get out, he grabbed he hand whispering he said “Your in this to deep to quit now. Stay away from him.”




Chapter 1                                                            1 Year Earlier
                Jenny Hodges had grown up knowing that you got nothing unless someone worked for it. Weather that someone was you or since pass relatives, someone had worked to support her expensive Manhattan lifestyle. Although this wasn't the brightest of days in jenny’s world she was certainly obliged to be headed to the reading of her uncle’s will. He was the only resemblance of a father that she had had. He had passed a month ago but the lawyers had to sift through the legal mess and obtain the proper paper work.
                As jenny reached the office building and entered, she was astonished by the cookie cutter shape everything had. This was supposed to be a Manhattan law firm not some uncultured and monotonous law firm from out on the west coast. All the same she reached the front desk and was directed to floor 33. She could smell the uptown hierarchy before the elevator doors even opened. She was greeted with a brief but again, monotone “hello” and whisked away to the conference room.
                “Now, shall we begin?”
                  She sat at the long, rounded table unsure of what was going to take place next. One of the lawyers slid the door shut and walked to the head of the room. Opening the blinds, and standing in awe of the view for a moment, he finally began.
                “Miss. Hodges, I am sorry for your loss however this matter must be attended to. You Uncle explained that everything be signed over to you under one condition…. “He paused unsure how to present the next piece. As if he was uncertain to how she would react. “You must get your father to sign off on it.”
                She sat shocked. Her father had abandoned her when she was still in diapers and now her uncle wanted him to sign the agreement. What kind of cruel punishment was this?
                Jenny gathered the papers and left the law office, still in shock. Her uncle had always despised her father for leaving her. Now he wanted him to sign the paper work. Jenny was sickened by the thought of trying to track down her father; in fact she felt her stomach flip the more she dwelled on the situation.
  She didn't even know if it was possible to find her father and whether she could ever get him to sign a paper for her. The truth of the matter was that she didn't even remember him. Making her wonder if he even remembered her. Either way this was going to be a bumpy ride.

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